Sunday, January 13, 2008

MY OPINION!!!

Over many years people enjoy and adore boxing. Boxing has gone through out the whole world. But even though boxing is a sport I think it should be banned. It should be banned because it is very violent and bad influence to children. Kids throughout the whole world will take boxing to heart and think it’s good to go around and fight people.

In my opinion I think boxing should be banned because it is simply violent and very harmful. I feel that boxing is the wrong sport for children and people to be watching because it can teach them to do the wrong things as in hit, hurt, punch, and get out of control. I also think boxing is pointless, who would want to see people punch each other. Boxing consist of three rounds of kicking and punching. In a championship boxing consists of 12 rounds and who ever gets knocked out first will lose the fight meanwhile the other would win. Boxing can get very serious as in bleeding and getting concussions. People that are in boxing is either getting hurt or die just from boxing. Boxing was mainly called the art of self defense but I feel that is just wrong.

The history of boxing is kind of harmful. Some people think boxing is a good sport and should not be banned like the Romans and Germans. Boxing was first created when a man had lift there fist against another person. Boxing first came out on 4000 BC. Boxing started all around the world and came through North America. Germans and Romans enjoyed and played boxing like if it was nothing. Boxing was also part of traditions and festivals and many people have died from boxing. That’s why I feel boxing should be banned. Boxing was brought to the United States in the 20th century to now be I feel it should stop. Boxing used to be bare meaning they had no head gear or gloves to protect themselves. So mostly without the protection it was wrestling so it was even more DANGEROUS!

A doctors feeling is that boxing should be banned because it is very dangerous and it’s not worth getting hurt and risking there lives just because they want to be cool. It’s not cool that you have to risk your life just to be cool no it doesn’t matter about being cool. BOXING IS DANGEROUS. Cuts and bruises are very common injuries as it comes to stitches and fractures and they are not good for your body. There maybe medical injuries were people burst blood vessels, have concussions, brain damages, broken ribs, and eternal bleeding. In my opinion boxing should really be banned and should never come back.

In conclusion of boxing and all the critical injuries boxing deserves to be banned. Boxing is bad influence and it’s very harmful and may people get hurt. Boxing should not involve people getting hurt and now that it’s been here for centuries it really deserves to be band.

2 comments:

Candice Lorenzo said...

Nice Page Victoria..
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CANDICE

cmorales411@yahoo.com said...

Great job Victoria! Your essay gives a good argument. You made a good point with the fact that boxers can get concussion. Nice boxing cat.


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